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Pete’s Dragon and Recovery of the Real World

When I wrote my blog post about dragons yesterday, I had no idea that my children would ask to spend the evening watching the new version of Pete’s Dragon on Netflix. I also had no idea that I would be moved by one scene in particular, and catch the subtle references to one of my favorite writings of J.R.R. Tolkien.
In the movie, Robert Reau_movie_poster_petesdragon_3f223dac.jpegdford’s character Meachum describes the time when, as a young man, he had a brief encounter with a dragon. He talks about being scared and almost shooting it, but then deciding not to, because… there was magic. He couldn’t find any other word to describe it but magic. He tells his daughter how this magic affects him: “It changes the way I see the world – the way I see trees, the way I see sunshine, the way, even, I see you.”
Meachum is speaking of what Tolkien called “recovery” or “a re-gaining – regaining of a clear view.” Tolkien said this was not seeing things as they are, but as we are meant to see them. He elaborated on this very extensively in his famous essay “On Fairy-Stories.” I highly recommend reading the entire thing.
Meachum’s daughter, Grace, is a forest ranger. In her first appearance in the movie, we see clearly that she loves the forest. She tells Pete that she grew up loving it and so took a job to help protect it. But she scoffs at her father’s dragon stories. When the evidence of a dragon mounts, she tells her boyfriend, “I know this forest like I know the back of my hand! How could I have missed a dragon?”
This is exactly what Tolkien was talking about. He spoke of appropriating things that are familiar to us, so that they become trite: “We say we know them. They have become like the things which once attracted us by their glitter, or their color, or their shape, and we laid hands on them, and then locked them in our hoard, acquired them, and acquiring ceased to look at them.” This was Grace’s problem. Even though she still loved the forest, it had become “known” to her, to the point that she was missing the true beauty and wonder hidden within it.
A couple of weeks ago, my family was at Carlsbad Caverns. We wandered slowly through the majestic rooms, in awe of everything around us. Only one thing perplexed us: there were constantly people rushing past us. They weren’t just moving at a more rapid pace – they were literally rushing to get through, barely even glancing at things around them. They were missing out on extraordinary beauty.
Tolkien speaks eloquently of how fairy stories or fantasy can help us recover the seeing of things the way we should. “Creative fantasy, because it is mainly trying to do something else (make something new), may open your hoard and let all the locked things fly away like cage-birds.”
I’d love to quote pages of the essay, but I’ll leave off with one more: “It was in fairy-stories that I first discovered the potency of the words, and the wonder of the things, such as stone, and wood, and iron; tree and grass; house and fire; bread and wine.”
It is through the fairy stories, the magic in the woods, and yes, the dragons, that we truly see the world around us. We recover the way we are meant to see it – as something magnificent and powerful, not trite and boring.
In The Two Towers, Eomer* asks,

“Do we walk in legends or on the green earth in the daylight?”

“A man may do both,’” said Aragorn. “For not we but those who come after will make the legends of our time. The green earth, say you? That is a mighty matter of legend, though you tread it under the light of day!”

IMG_0081.JPG*Fun tidbit: in the movies, Eomer was played by Karl Urban, who also starred in Pete’s Dragon.

Why Dragons?

It’s no secret that my current novel features dragons in a big way. In fact, dragons have somehow managed to show up in almost everything I’ve written, even when there are already dinosaurs involved. (Yes, you can have dinosaurs and dragons in the same story. Stop it!)
Some would say dragons are played out, overused, exhausted for story potential. After all, they’ve been around for a while. Almost every major culture throughout the planet has legends and stories of dragons, dating back many thousands of years in some cases.
The Epic of Gilgamesh, one of the oldest stories of all, references dragons and dragon fangs. Some even interpret the monster Humbaba as a dragon (though I don’t think so).
SmaugDestroyingLakeTown.jpgDragons are even in the Bible. In the book of Revelation, the dragon is used as a symbol of Satan. But in the ancient book of Job (possibly the oldest part of the Bible), God describes the leviathan as a fire-breathing dragon, and uses it as an illustration of His (God’s) creative power.
In modern fantasy fiction, dragons are abundant. I glanced over my bookshelves before starting this post and saw at least ten books with the word “dragon” in the title, and that doesn’t include obvious dragon-central stories like The Hobbit!
Dragons are so integral to fantasy in general that the all-time king of fantasy role-playing games includes them in the title. (Dungeons & Dragons for those five of you who didn’t get the reference.) Multiple game systems and fantastic worlds of writing have been filled with detailed descriptions of dragons and their abilities, culture, lairs, and so on.
Now I’m not going to try to get into deep psychological analyzation of the human mind’s fascination with dragons. If you want that, I suggest using Google to find it. It’s out there. I have no idea how much, if any, of it is actually worthwhile.
Dragons, through various stories, have been friends or enemies, good guys or bad, helpful or hurtful… but always dangerous, always powerful, and usually near invincible.
So what makes me think I can add anything to the dragon mythos?
To be honest, I didn’t start out thinking I would be writing about dragons. It just happened. Apparently, they’re so close to my imaginative process that they just forced their way into my thoughts and plotting.
Once I had dragons in the story, though, I had to start thinking about their abilities and origins and so on. In this, I hope I’ve been able to do something somewhat unique. I think the origins of my story’s dragons are something unusual. When the book eventually arrives, maybe you’ll agree.
Or maybe you’ll ignore it altogether because “dragons are so 2000 (B.C.)!”

Influences on my Writing

I am a voracious reader, when I want to be. There have been some times where reading has sadly taken a back seat to other pursuits, but it’s always come back as one of my primary hobbies. I can’t go long without reading.
When visitors enter our home, the first sight they see (and usually comment on) are bookshelves. I’m quite proud of our little library. We’re always adding to it, but sometimes it takes big jumps in size.
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One time, when another book collector donated everything to a local library, I helped sort it all and got my hands on a dozen or so books related to J.R.R. Tolkien and his writings.
A few years ago, I did book reviews online and got lots of free books in the mail. That was awesome, but took up too much time which my family needed. I was reading and reviewing up to five novels a week at the height of it all.
All of this reading influences my writing, of course. But certain writers and their books have had much more of an influence than others.
It should be obvious by now that J.R.R. Tolkien is my hero. The man’s creative power amazes me. I can read The Lord of the Rings every year and still enjoy it. The sheer depth of his world-building combined with his meticulous choice of wording creates writing that I can lose myself inside, over and over.
C.S. Lewis is second. While I’ve loved the Narnia books since my dad read them to me very early, I’m also a big fan of his Space Trilogy. I adore the way he weaves deep philosophies into simple scenes.
The living writer who’s had the most influence on me is probably Stephen R. Lawhead. I have read everything he’s written, and while some of his more recent work isn’t as enthralling as it used to be, the Pendragon Cycle, the Song of Albion trilogy, and Byzantium rank among my all-time favorites. He excels at the first-person narrative, taking the reader directly into the story, full of blood, sweat and tears (but minus the nihilism of other modern writers).
I would be greatly remiss I didn’t mention comic book writers. The globe-trotting, history-based adventures of Scrooge McDuck as written by Carl Barks and Don Rosa filled my young head with short but well-crafted tales. The action and intrigue of G.I. Joe by Larry Hama gave me countless ideas for stories (and battles!).
Time would fail me to tell of Brandon Sanderson, Orson Scott Card, Anne Elisabeth Stengl, Tom Clancy, Athol Dickson, not to mention all the classic writers – Charles Dickens, Robert Louis Stevenson, Leo Tolstoy, George MacDonald, Arthur Conan Doyle, Victor Hugo, and so on.
It’s a great cloud of writers who have gone before (and are still going). I hope I’ve absorbed the best I can from each of them.

Rejections and Revisions

Ben Burtt, sound designer for Star Wars, famously said, “Movies aren’t released — they escape!” The same could be said about novels.
I’ve been through multiple full revisions of my current novel. I’ve gotten feedback from beta readers and revised significant things based on that. And I’m constantly tweaking a line or two here and there, the longer the process goes on.
If I get an agent, that agent will almost certainly request changes to the manuscript, possibly major changes. Then, if a publisher gets interested in the book, the publisher will suggest/request more changes, some of them possibly major again. Changes will keep going on for quite a while.
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I’ve been facing a lot of rejection the last few days. I know, I know. “Famous Author X also got rejected 14 gajillion times.” You know what else Famous Author X got? An acceptance.
I’m not giving up, but there are times where the sheer number of rejections, all of them without any real feedback whatsoever, start to feel oppressive.
And that leads to thoughts of more revisions. Maybe if I change this up, or switch that around, or fundamentally transform one of the characters… Last night, I actually mapped out a major revision of the last 1/3 of the book, not based on any feedback I’ve received, but only on my own perception of what might work better.
Unfortunately, even that revision, if I had already done it, wouldn’t have affected any of the rejections I’ve already received. They’ve all been based on queries and opening pages. So while the revision I’ve conceived might improve the book, it’s not clear that it would help me take the next step (get an agent).
So will I make those revisions? Maybe. Will I receive more rejections? Certainly. Someday, in some way, this book will be released. Or rather… this book will escape.

Music to Write By

In discussions with other writers, this question often comes up: what do you listen to while you write?
It’s entirely possible, of course, to write without music playing, and I do that sometimes. But I live in a house with five other people and a dog, so there are many distractions. Putting on a set of headphones and blocking out everything else is often very helpful.
Some types of music are more conducive to writing than others. Personally, I prefer instrumental music for this purpose. Words are another distraction and might work themselves into what I’m writing, if I’m not careful.
I’ve experimented with numerous choices, browsing Soundcloud and YouTube. I’ve found a few obscure artists that I like and use from time to time. Here’s one example: Denny Schneidemesser. Check him out.
There are three movie soundtracks I kept coming back to while writing my novel in November and December. I enjoy a lot of soundtracks, but these three just clicked with me for some reason. All three of these are on YouTube in full.
howtotrain.jpgThe first is How To Train Your Dragon by John Powell. While I love the Lord of the Rings soundtracks, they’ve become far too iconic in my head. I can’t listen to them without specifically thinking of the movies. With How To Train Your Dragon, however, the music is not locked into specific things in my head (though occasionally, I can’t help but think of riding a dragon through the clouds…). I like the movie, but the music is beautiful and sweeping on its own. It’s also varied enough to move me through different moods.
The second is Oblivion (the movie, not the video game) by M83, Anthony Gonzalez, and Joseph Trapanese. It comes from a 2013 Tom Cruise sci-fi movie which wasn’t extremely popular. However, the soundtrack is excellent. It’s engaging enough through both quiet and action scenes, and it slowly builds to an impressive climax. There’s a melancholy woven throughout this whole soundtrack, and that can play strongly into quieter writing scenes. While I don’t find myself thinking much about the actual movie, if I catch a glimpse of the track titles, it does bring something to mind: the iconic Thomas Macauley quote that is used as a theme throughout Oblivion. That’s not a bad thing; it’s a theme that can play into what I’m writing from time to time.oblivion.jpg
HacksawRidge_grande.jpgThe third and most recent soundtrack that I find myself listening to is Hacksaw Ridge by Rupert Gregson-Williams. I don’t listen to the entire soundtrack on this one, but the second half, which is pretty much all battle scenes, is tense and exciting. There are many, many “battle scene” music choices, but this one just really works for me, for some reason. It’s hard to nail down the exact reason.
And that’s the way it is for most people, I’ve found. Music enjoyment is subjective (not unlike literary agents and queries). Everyone has different tastes and different favorites. These are some of mine. What are yours?

What I Thought I’d Write (and what I actually did)

I always thought I’d write an epic fantasy series. I was going to be the next J.R.R. Tolkien. Or something.
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In junior high, I created a world. A friend who was also interested in fantasy helped with the map because he wanted to write some stories in a different region of the world. It was one part awesome and three parts ridiculous. (Seriously. There was a country named Paulania, because the king’s name was Paul.)
I wrote stories where kids from our world traveled to this one (Narnia? What’s that?). Some of these got typed on the manual typewriter I mentioned in the last post. Most were hand-written in spiral notebooks.
When I got older, I thought the world and much of its creation still held promise, but the stories needed major changes. First of all… these kids from our earth didn’t add ANYTHING to the story. Why did I even have them there? (Oh, yea. Narnia.) I ditched the kids and went back to writing just the world’s residents.
This novel was started, abandoned, started over, abandoned, completely re-written, lost, started over, and abandoned… maybe not in that particular order. Eventually, I used the setting and basic plot as part of a RPG campaign that went pretty well. I even considered re-writing it again with elements and characters from that campaign.
Because this was what I was supposed to do, right? Epic fantasy! It’s what I had been working on my whole life. But… it just wasn’t working. Ever. No matter how many times I tried, it was still too derivative, too cliche.
When I finally published a book (self-published in 2015), it wasn’t even fiction! I wrote an Advent study guide, primarily for my family and church friends. That was NEVER on my radar of what I would write, until it actually happened.  (link)
However, the exercise of completing that small project gave me the motivation and encouragement I needed to get back to writing in general. I toyed with a number of ideas over the next year, but nothing seemed to click. I began to lose motivation again.
Then… mid-October last year, I got a bizarre image in my head. I began to wonder about it, and before long, an entire world and storyline exploded out of it. I wrote down a lot of ideas and thoughts and even wrote a few pages.
I was browsing online and saw National Novel Writing Month for November. I had seen it before, but never really considered it. Now I did. It was a challenge. I had an idea that might work. I needed motivation. This was it.
I wrote a novel. Full-length. 76,000 words. (50K during Nov., to reach the goal, and the rest added in early December.)
But it wasn’t epic fantasy. It was YA fantasy, told in first person point of view. This was totally different from anything I had written or had planned to write. It wasn’t even traditional fantasy – the story contains modern-day elements and even some sci-fi pieces.
Yet it works. I’m actually quite proud of it. After lots of editing, revisions, and feedback from beta readers, I’m now in the process of searching for an agent.  But that’s another story.

My Early Writing Attempts

One day, an idealized number of years ago, a little boy told his mother, “I want to write books!” His mother smiled and supported him. She showed him how to cut a brown paper grocery bag in the right way to have 10-15 blank pages to staple together. Th52-lb-1-8-brown-paper-barrel-sack-500-bundle.jpge boy promptly wrote and drew a story of superheroes versus Godzilla. And aliens.
A few years later, the boy announced that he wanted to learn how to type. After all, how could he become a writer without typing? He saved his money and his dad took him to the local pawn shop, where he bought a beat-up blue manual typewriter. He borrowed a textbook from the library and worked through the lessons all alone. It wasn’t long before he was able to move on from stick figure comic books.
For a time, he dabbled in mystery stories, like the Hardy Boys, but soon returned to the fantastic worlds that so filled his imagination (fired by Lewis, Tolkien, Lawhead, and others). He typed stories of superheroes and monsters, swords and laser guns.
When he reached college, he majored in Writing, learning all he could about the English language, the process of writing, and more. He tolerated the technical side and reveled in the creative. His teachers enjoyed his talent and encouraged him to use it.
Then “real life” took over. Out of college, he had to find a real job, and no matter how he searched, the jobs never had much to do with writing. He plugged away on a massive fantasy novel, but it slowly got pushed aside. He got married, had kids. All forms of writing got pushed farther and farther aside, becoming abandoned for years at a time. For a short while, he found new hope in writing book reviews and started a website, but that too had to be abandoned because of busyness.
Which brings us to the present. I’m no longer the little boy. The typewriter is long gone, as is college. The pressures of life have not subsided, but the desire to use my writing talent has returned with a fervor.
And so the writing journey had a resurrection in 2015. I’ll tell you more about that next time…
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What this blog is about (and what it isn’t)

Welcome to my blog! Most likely you’re here because you followed one of my social media links. Or maybe you just like to browse every new blog that comes along. (In which case, I want your job. How do you have that much free time? There’s over 100 million blogs, you know!)
In any event, this is my newest outlet for my writing, a place where I can ramble on a bit more than I do on Facebook and far more than is allowed on Twitter (unless you cheat and post a screenshot of a bunch of writing).
At this point, some of you may be wondering if I’m going to end every single paragraph with a parenthetical statement. (The answer is: no, I’m not. I actually have a bad habit of using ellipses more than parenthesis…)
The focus for this blog is my writing. Over the coming weeks, I’ll elaborate more about what I’ve written, what I’m planning to write, and so on. I’ll also go into the writing process, where I get ideas, books I’m reading, and so on.
I will not be using this blog to discuss politics. I have political opinions, but I’ve learned over the years that the internet is the worst place to share them. If you want to talk in person about politics sometime, I’m game. But I won’t be doing it here.
I also won’t be talking much about my personal life outside of how it relates to writing. That’s what Facebook is for, to share those things with my family and friends. (It’s also not for politics.)
I also will not be doing much talking about my faith here. As much as it is an essential part of who I am, it’s not the topic of this blog. Again, I would love to discuss it in person, but this is not the place, except as far as it relates to writing.
In case I haven’t made it clear… this blog is about writing! My primary writing focus right now is a YA (Young Adult) fantasy novel named Viridia. The novel is complete and I’m seeking just the right literary agent to help me sell it. If it works out, this could be the beginning of a series. More on that later.
For now, I’ll go play with the design and settings of this site some more until I’m happy with them. I look forward to sharing with you all!IMG_1436.jpg
 

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