Tim Frankovich

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House of David Season 2 Review

You know what's in that bag, right?
(You know what’s in that bag, right?)

Introduction:

The Amazon/Wonder Project show, House of David, has now completed its second season. Far and away, it is the best adaptation of the David story that I have seen. I’ve loved this story my entire life and always been disappointed by adaptations. This one is not perfect, but it’s the best yet.

For starters, it is an adaptation, not a verse-by-verse conversion. I see people griping about things like this all the time, saying things like, “why can’t they just show it like it is in the Bible?” Because that doesn’t work for visual media. The Bible is not a novel, and it’s most certainly not a film script. If you tried to film the life of David using solely what is written, most characters would never speak a word. Michal, the love interest for these two seasons, would not talk. King Saul would only have a handful of lines. 

With that out of the way, let’s discuss the things I loved, liked, disliked, and hated.

Things I loved:

• They got Jonathan right. This has been a struggle for so many previous attempts. I don’t know why it’s so hard for writers to understand the relationship between best friends. In this case, they did it right, and that one aspect is strong enough for me to forgive a lot of other problems.

• Samuel was also brilliant. Every time he’s on the screen, the show goes up a notch. A huge part of that is due to the outstanding acting of Stephen Lang. Another part is the next thing I loved:

• The show is not afraid to embrace the supernatural side of the story (most of the time*). Prophecy, curses, anointings, giants and gods fill the story. Many previous adaptations have skimmed over these or ignored them altogether. 

• The expansion of secondary characters is well done. The creators gave interesting storylines to people like Eliab and Eshbaal. These arcs fit in with the overall story and add to the primary themes in surprising ways.

• Goliath was awesome.

Things I liked:

• King Saul makes for a compelling and tragic figure, so convinced he’s right when it’s so obvious he’s not. His character forms the hub of a list of relationships that create so much of the show’s tension. The relationship with David is not the least of these, showing how these two men actually did care about each other at the beginning.

• While the show’s title is House of David, these two seasons actually focus primarily on the house of Saul and, to a lesser extent, the house of Jesse. The way parents and brothers and sisters all interact is one of the key factors propelling the entire storyline. These family relationships create intrigue, heartache, and surprising hope at times.

• Abner is great.

• King Achish of the Philistines is an interesting recurring character.

Things I didn’t like:

• I’m disappointed we haven’t gotten introduced to more of David’s mighty men, e.g., Benaiah, Abishai, and the Three. I have hopes we’ll see them in season three, but at the same time, we get…

• Name-drops. I’m fine with introducing Uriah early, though I’d rather have the warriors I just listed. And introducing the witch of Endor is okay, if a bit over-the-top. But name-dropping Bathsheba was just wrong. We’re still something like eighteen+ years from David’s affair with her. She might not even be born at this point!**

• In the episode at the tabernacle, Samuel is shown wearing the ephod and entering the holy place, fulfilling the role of high priest. Not only was Samuel not the high priest (Ahimelech, the actual high priest, is right there!), he wasn’t even a priest! He was a Levite, and not from the line of Aaron.

• Every so often, there are some poor graphics. I know there’s a controversy over the use of AI for them. Setting that aside for a different conversation, there are some bad crowd scenes. Even so, it’s better than virtually all other “Christian” movies or shows.

• I don’t understand the move of season two into a new streaming channel and charging more. If your goal was to attract non-religious viewers, you just shot yourself in the foot. Why would they pay extra to check out your show? It seems like a foolish move, since now only the biggest fans (like me) or the die-hard “Christian consumers” will watch it.

Things I hated:

• One of my biggest gripes with The Chosen show is anachronistic dialogue. House of David managed to avoid that for the most part. But in season two, a couple of horrendous lines cropped up. “What does your heart tell you?” – said no Hebrew ever. And “We must live in our truth.” Ugh. Bad philosophy AND bad dialogue. Please leave this kind of nonsense out of a show set three thousand years ago.

Conclusion:

The show runners have stated that season three will complete the arc of “the rise of David.” I’m assuming that means season three will cover all of David’s time on the run. I’m a little disappointed, as that time period feels like it could include several seasons’ worth of stories. (The time at Ziklag alone should be an entire season!)

That being said, my family and I will all be sitting down to watch every episode. It’s a show that all of us can enjoy together and talk about long after the TV has gone dark. It’s not just a good “Bible” show; it’s a good show.

*Uriah telling David, “our gods are stone; yours is alive” felt a little odd after all the other supernatural acknowledgement.

**Bathsheba and Uriah had no children yet at the time of David’s adultery, indicating they had not been married very long. And Hebrew women married in their early teens, regardless of the age of the man.

Available Now!

Under the Moon’s Gaze, the final book in The Certainty of Blood trilogy, launches today! Now you can read the entirety of this epic, brutal, and beautiful series.

“Let it be known throughout the empire and under the moon’s gaze.”

Having survived his encounter with the god of chaos, Aldan—the arena fighter known as Clanless—finds himself again taken somewhere against his will. The blood-wraith who once tormented him now threatens his beloved Kekeen. Together, they return to places Aldan never thought he’d see again: his home… and the arena where he first learned how to kill.

Koland rushes back to the capital city ahead of an advancing army. As the city falls under siege, he struggles to keep hope alive in the face of an overwhelming enemy. For Suirel, god of chaos, is coming to the city too. And only the one called Clanless can stand in his way.

Will Aldan be able to return to the city in time? And what can one man do against a god and an army? One final arena duel awaits him under the moon’s gaze, a duel that will decide the fate of empires and worlds alike.

The Certainty of Blood trilogy concludes here!

COVER REVEAL!

“Let it be known throughout the empire and under the moon’s gaze.”

Having survived his encounter with the god of chaos, Aldan—the arena fighter known as Clanless—finds himself again taken somewhere against his will. The blood-wraith who once tormented him now threatens his beloved Kekeen. Together, they return to places Aldan never thought he’d see again: his home… and the arena where he first learned how to kill.

Koland rushes back to the capital city ahead of an advancing army. As the city falls under siege, he struggles to keep hope alive in the face of an overwhelming enemy. For Suirel, god of chaos, is coming to the city too. And only the one called Clanless can stand in his way.

Will Aldan be able to return to the city in time? And what can one man do against a god and an army? One final arena duel awaits him under the moon’s gaze, a duel that will decide the fate of empires and worlds alike.

The Certainty of Blood trilogy concludes here!

Pre-orders coming soon! RELEASING OCTOBER 28!!!

Dragons of the 1870s

In case you haven’t heard, my next book is about cowboys and dragons. Someone suggested it online, and I haven’t been able to get it out of my head. Also, I couldn’t think of anyone better to write it than this Texas boy.

The story will be set in the mid-1870s with two Texas Rangers trying to uncover the truth behind some rumors of a mountain full of gold and the Comanche thunderbird. (Spoiler: dragon)

This is a whole new type of story for me, so I’m having a lot of fun and stretching my writing skills. Stay tuned!

Getting There

The latest draft of Under the Moon’s Gaze is now in the hands of beta readers! The cover designer now has the art concept in hand. It’s all coming… soon…

Title Reveal!

Coming this Fall. The epic conclusion to the trilogy begun in The Certainty of Blood and continued in Wolf Chosen

Adventures in Book Sales

This weekend, I was selling at a Spring Book Fair. We were inside an enormous “event tent,” but it was 80 degrees at first. We were all sweating. Around 2:00, a cold front came through. If you’ve never experienced a cold front in the South, you may not understand, so let me explain:

The temperature instantly dropped about 10 degrees. Heavy winds gusted through (the tables nearest the entrance had to weigh down their stuff). And torrential rain poured down, drumming on our tent. THEN the fun began:

We were all, naturally, looking up at the big tent, hoping it wouldn’t leak. Or blow apart. Then the author beside me looked down and said, “Oh. We have water.” Turns out the parking lot was a bit sloped, so water flowed down it at my feet and under my table… where my boxes of books were sitting.

The water flow didn’t cover the entire area, just one swath angled across the fair. The two other tables I saw in the water had their stuff in plastic bins. I had cardboard. So a mad caper ensued in which myself and three other authors were yanking my boxes out and stacking them wherever we could find: on my table, on my stool, on top of some PVC used for banners.

The good news is: no books were harmed. My boxes were very thick cardboard, so the water didn’t get through. The box holding some of my supplies was damaged, but no big deal. The organizer came by after the rain subsided and asked if I wanted some plastic to put on the ground to put my boxes on. I said: “I’m standing in a half inch of water, so I don’t think that would work.” Good thing my shoes were waterproof.

And readers STILL showed up in the middle of all of this! I had to compliment them, even while I explained why I was leaning on an unsightly pile of boxes. In the end, no real harm was done, and I had another story to tell. Adventures in book sales, everyone. You never know what will happen.

LOOK AT THIS

LOOK AT IT! My daughter made a plush version of Viridia!! This is the most awesome thing ever!

(For comparison:)

Chroma Is Released!

THE SERIES IS NOW COMPLETE!! Chroma, the final book of the Dragontek Lore series, is available today! This science-fantasy action-adventure series (with dragons!) was written with teenage guys in mind, but it’s fun for all ages!

Find the entire series here!

Chroma At Last!

Finally, finally, finally! You would not believe all the behind-the-scenes stuff that has gone on for the past few months to get this done. Unbelievable. HUGE, HUGE THANKS to the wonderful Tremani Sutcliffe for stepping in and creating the special art for this cover. Check out her epic fantasy art here.

But now, here at last is the cover for Chroma, the final book of the Dragontek Lore series:

The danger from outside The Circle may be greater than any of the dragons Beryl and his friends have faced so far. Chroma, mother of dragons, is at work.

But can Beryl deal with that problem while the last and deadliest dragon, his former friend Onyx, still roams? And the draconic claiming to be the dragon Viridia reborn is plotting something sinister as well.

This triple threat sets the stage for the spectacular conclusion to the Dragontek Lore series. It all ends here for Beryl and friends. But will they emerge unscathed? Or even alive?

Pre-orders are now available!

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